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Ok so im gonna post one of my VERY OLD jedi order document that was very successful and the jedi were hardly EVERY Cancerous.

New Jobs:

Jedi Sentinel:The Jedi Sentinel is a double-bladed lightsaber user whom is acute to defensive dueling tactics. The Jedi Sentinel's job is to protect high-ranking officials and clones by any means necessary; this can vary between on and off the battlefield. Jedi Sentinels are generally on the battlefield with Guardians if no high-value target is in danger or a base is under siege. The Jedi Sentinel is equipped with a double-bladed lightsaber. They are trained in hostage recovery as well. A Jedi Sentinel skill in one on one combat is unparalleled, and they are also adept in dealing with multiple enemies.


Jedi Consular:A wise Jedi whom prefers to expand their knowledge of the force and lead the Jedi rather than be at the front lines. Jedi Consulars will be assisting other Jedi via leadership and knowledge. Jedi Consulars are the last to fight in events (only if necessary). They are equipped with a single bladed lightsaber. The Jedi Consular doesn't prefer to duel, or fight, but instead have chosen a peaceful way of life, and prefer to negotiate situations. When it comes down to it, a Jedi consular can utilize their defensive capabilities and strong connection with the force to fight in an almost frightening display.


Jedi Guardian:The Jedi Guardian is a Jedi Duelist who prefers to be on the battlefields front-line. Guardians are natural duelists and have strong personalities to back that up. Jedi Guardians are the first to the fight in events alongside clones. The Jedi Guardian is equipped with a single-bladed lightsaber, and the best are equipped with a second lightsaber with a curved design. The Jedi Guardian is very unique, and often have their own fighting styles, making them a powerful unpredictable opponent.


Jedi Shadow(2):The Jedi Shadows are a pair of elite double blade users that specialize in hostage extraction and other high priority missions. They can be related to the Omega/Delta of the Jedi Order. They branch off of the Sentinel branches, which, after they finish their training, and reach the rank of master, they can progress into this path to become this elite job.





Strike System:


Verbal Warning- Given to Jedi who do not fully understand the rules. Multiple verbal warnings will not be given, only one or possibly two if it is forgotten that you needed a first verbal warning for something.


Strike 1- First strike given to you. This strike will not stay on your permanent strike record, and will vanish after 2 weeks of you being good. A first strike only stays on your permanent strike record if and only if you have been on Probation before.


Strike 2- This strike will remain on your permanent strike record forever, and it will vanish after 2 weeks time of being good. You can only get a second strike if you get a First strike first.


Strike 3- If this strike is given while you are on Probation you will be removed from the Jedi Order forever.


Once you have 2 strikes accumulated, you are put on Probation for however long the Jedi Council sees fit. After completing Probation, one of your strikes are removed. If you are put on probation again up to 3 weeks after being off probation, you will be removed from the Jedi Order. If you accumulate 2 Permanent Strikes on your record, you will be removed from the Jedi Order.


For the council meeting- Say Jedi Padawan “Clouds” RDM’s another Jedi during a duel. That is a verbal warning. Then, during an event he decides to start ordering troopers around that he is not even going with during the event, that is his first Strike. A few days later of him being toxic, he decides to spew his liquids and tell another Jedi to kill themselves and that he will do everything in his power to get them banned. That is his second strike, and he is put on Probation. If he does another bad thing, he gets his third strike, and is removed from the Jedi Order forever. But let's say he goes through his 2 week probation while doing nothing wrong. He now has a “strike” on his permanent record, and he still has his first strike. If he gets another strike, ever, he will be removed from the Jedi Order for having 2 strikes on his permanent record.


Every time you earn a rank improvement, You will have one less strike available to you, Starting with Three at Padawan.

The Jedi High Council


The Jedi Council's job is to lead the Jedi Order in the right direction. Within the Jedi Council, all votes are equal and all opinions are equal. Authority within the order is based on whom maintains the given title and is based on the individual them self. The Grand Master/High Council appoints specific council members to serves as "High Council Members". Jedi High Council Members are dictated by the individual, not the rank. Only Masters can be on the Council.


Jedi Grandmaster-

The Grand Master is in charge of keeping all the members of the Jedi Order in check and making sure new Council Members that are voted in are trustworthy.


Master of The Order-

The Master of the Order is the eldest jedi and is in charge of training younglings/padawans and maintaining order within the Jedi Order.


Sword of the Jedi-

The Sword of the jedi is in charge of training everyone in their lightsaber arts and is 3rd in command right after the MOTO if he/she is the only one on they are in charge of doing PassiveRP and Raids.



Official Rules:


Related to- Inactivity:


  1. If you are inactive for 1 days with no LOA, your master has the right to disown you.

  2. If you are inactive for 2 days with no LOA, the following will happen. Padawans- Demoted to CT. Knights- Demoted to CT (Unless you are a special case). Masters- Demoted to CT.

  3. If you are a Lore master and you are not online at least 3 days a week you will be demoted.

Related to- General/Common Sense:


  1. Going in the holocron room is a strikeable offense if you are not a Council Member.

  2. Going in the Jedi Council Room will earn you Probation if you are not a Jedi Council Member.

  3. Do not ignite your lightsaber, unless training/combat - This is a strikeable offense.

  4. Any and all power hungriness is to cease and desist. ((Ex. Demanding salutes, ordering around troopers without permission from their commander, etc.))

Related to- Insubordination:


  1. No disrespect, there is no emotion, there is peace.

  2. Using Staff powers to go into a restricted area while not doing your job is a strikeable offense. ((Ex. council room, holocron room.))

  3. No Grey Jedi at all. ((Ex. Saying or implying you hate the council/a council member, being insubordinate and not following the jedi rules, filling a padawan(s) head with propaganda, having vendettas against one or more members of the Jedi Order, complaining about council decisions/general complaining/conspiring instead of discussing with the council your issues directly, or any general heresy to the order overall. Being a Gray Jedi will result in an instant demotion from the Jedi Order))

  4. No back-talking whatsoever.

  5. You must never lie, you must always be honest.





Related to-Missions/Raids:


  1. Not following your life count in raids will result in receiving a strike.

  2. No complaining if you are not assigned to a high priority target/area during a mission/raid

  3. Never kill a friendly! 1 Team Kill = 50 laps if caught! If you have to run over 200 laps, it will result in more serious punishment.

  4. Always try to save a Sith if given the option.

Related to- Training:


  1. Always bow after a duel and no toxic fluids. No complaining after a duel is over.

  2. Using a saber you did not RP build or do not own will earn you a strike.

  3. No begging for duels.

  4. No bragging about your position on the scoreboard

  5. No asking when your knight/master trials will happen.

  6. No cheating on any sort of written test (We aren’t idiots)

  7. If you are online and are found intently skipping a mandatory training you will be punished.

Related to- Etiquette:


  1. Always bow to your higher ups. (Exception, masters to council members.)

  2. You are not allowed to directly order another Jedi of the same rank as you to do something. ((Ex. a padawan telling another padawan “Don’t do <this>!”, instead inform the other padawan “Doing <this> is against the rules.”))

  3. Spreading your toxic fluids and spewing the liquid all over your fellow Jedi is a strikeable offense.

  4. Always bow before and after a duel.
Keep in mind yes this is long but it works out and also things can be removed/change(some of it is in JvS format just for now).

Tell me your THOUGHTS!
 

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K the document is ok but that inactivity shit is harsh. Remember people are going to be donating for Jedi and if they leave for like 2 days without an LOA they get demoted to CT? I would tone that down a bit but other than that I like it
 

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Point taken will look into a suitable time limit thinking on the lines of 4 days and also doing it where Padawan to CT, Knight to Padawan, Master to Knight, CM to Master.

Also gonna add if u tell ur master/CM about your absence instead of posting a LOA that would also be fine.
 
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+1 Jedi should be held to high standards, and must follow these rules (Except the LOA thing, that is way too harsh. A person can have a health issue happen and be gone for a week or more. Ever heard of real life???)


Also, I feel people should earn the privilege to be a Jedi through good RP, having knowledge of the lore of Jedi, and going through trials and such. Because on literally every other server. Donator Jedi always end up being cancer who failRP and drive off the good players.

Also, a donation means giving money to a person, group, or company without the expectation or want of something in return. You don't "Donate" for Jedi, you're buying it. Learn the difference and stop lying.

And also, Donators on most servers tend to act like high and mighty asshats. We need to enforce a player equality rule. Whether I donate 10$ or 500$, I expect to be treated the same as anyone else and have to abide by the same rules.
 
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I agree with all of this, the only problem I see with this(Besides the harsh loa) is probably the rule about being online while mandatory training is taking place, even if they are online and just want to play a different game doesn't mean they should be punished, unless I'm reading this wrong and it means online on the server, if that is the case ignore this and I agree completely.
 

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+1 Jedi should be held to high standards, and must follow these rules (Except the LOA thing, that is way too harsh. A person can have a health issue happen and be gone for a week or more. Ever heard of real life???)


Also, I feel people should earn the privilege to be a Jedi through good RP, having knowledge of the lore of Jedi, and going through trials and such. Because on literally every other server. Donator Jedi always end up being cancer who failRP and drive off the good players.

Also, a donation means giving money to a person, group, or company without the expectation or want of something in return. You don't "Donate" for Jedi, you're buying it. Learn the difference and stop lying.

And also, Donators on most servers tend to act like high and mighty asshats. We need to enforce a player equality rule. Whether I donate 10$ or 500$, I expect to be treated the same as anyone else and have to abide by the same rules.

I can promise you I am not gonna treat anyone differently just cause they have access to mommy's credit card. They break the rules they gonna lose their shit
 

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I find some of these things a bit too strict. The Loa thing especially sorry but I'm going to say -1 for my personal thoughts
This is still a draft but still some of these r quite needed to find a perfect balance and if u are referring the the strike able offenses that can happen they r easy to be removed. (This isn't on there I think but if u prove yourself/ 1 week time a strike can be removed after some time but if its a perma strike you can talk about it getting removed.
 

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I don't agree with any of this, mainly all of the things in here are wrong. 1. Grand master trains younglings and other Jedi, Master of the order keeps track of council members ect. Roles wont be a thing since its custom lightsaber animations. The inactive thing is also way to strict. basically this hole thing is way to strict and most of it is wrong. this would fit better for jvs not clone wars.
 

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^^^^^^ the only thing I like about this is the different Jedi roles which add more rp. Besides that -1, it sounds like a jvs rule roster to be completely honest with you. I also partially agree with schrödinger, but I would think more of an interview system b4 paying, rather than not being able to pay at all.
 

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This was reformatted to fit a JvS server a bit and those roles are council roles you know Master of the Order, Grand Master,etc kinda need them they were apart of the council.

Still need to fix a lot on it so it can fit this servers description
 

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I'm not saying they arent needed you mixed those 2 roles up. in jvs it would be diffrent but this is clone wars and yoda trained the younglings.
 

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WAIT Really?! SHIT I never changed it thats a funny story i'll have to tell 1 of these days.

Otherwise Im about to start changing the document a hella lot
 
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^^^^^^ the only thing I like about this is the different Jedi roles which add more rp. Besides that -1, it sounds like a jvs rule roster to be completely honest with you. I also partially agree with schrödinger, but I would think more of an interview system b4 paying, rather than not being able to pay at all.


That is a good idea right there. Interview people to see how they are, test their lore knowledge, and so on.
 

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Yeah I was gonna talk to Chris or Riddick about it once it came out, but knowing Chris he might have already thought of it.
 
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I'm leaning more supportive to Jedi after Riddick told me the other night he'd be in charge of them and won't tolerate any fucking around within the Order. So I'm going to assume that Riddick will interview and test people accordingly.
 

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Sounds nice, plus I'd hope it'd be that way if I'm gonna be in it lol. I have some ideas ill pitch to Riddick or someone when it comes out.
 

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Demorazor I would love to just sit in a channel with you can exchange ideas so we have a good idea of what we would like to pass on to riddick
 
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